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Reason
Contributed by
Tantive14
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:33:04 AM in AEST
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You are the reason,
That I awake.
You are the one,
Who makes my knees shake.
The reason I breathe,
The reason I live
Without you
My life simply is,
Dark, empty
And without purpose
A barren place
Like the moons pale surface.
Night draws near
And I head towards home
A Prisoner of dreams
Destined to roam
Through the vast empty spaces
I drift aimlessly
Until you can come
I wait patiently
For the one who will love me
For the rest of my days
The one who can find me
Inside of the maze
Of my heart and my soul
It is no surprise
The darkest night will end
And the sun will rise
You are the reason
That I awake
The reason I live
To see today
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Tantive14
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2004-11-14 01:33:04]
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Re: Reason
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by evil_angel on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:42:01 AM AEST
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| that is a kick a* poem! i luv it! |
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Re: Reason
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:58:48 AM AEST
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Your flow and rhyme scheme is flawless.
Being a romanticist, I am a big fan of this piece.
Less is more, and is what you have clearly demonstrated.
A heartfelt gesture!
Simply bliss.
-Romanticist. |
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