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brother
Contributed by
matlock
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Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 06:06:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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we distill in a flowery phase,
great-thinkers as children romp wild-eyed and life-stained around us,
ring around the poesy a pocket full of poetry,
and we know who we will be,
as we straighten and descend over opposite rills,
each, the other's mirror,
I will see you in the next life,
I your cousin or you my wife,
and if I leave before you,
watch the horizon from our garden,
until I grow from a dot to resting next to you at this spot,
again .
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matlock
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2002-07-19 06:06:54]
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Re: brother
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by Chrissie on
Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 07:09:44 AM AEST
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I certainly did enjoy it...and I love your poem. I find it outstandingly beautiful and am looking forward to reading more from you.
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Re: brother
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by chatabox on
Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 08:44:15 PM AEST
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bang!..its a hit first time, I loved it.
welcome, Ilook forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: brother
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by matlock on
Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 11:32:27 PM AEST
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Thank you for your warmth. This is very new for me, but I will add more soon. I am excited that there are so many here with like-minded passions.
I have always been trepedatious about sharing my writing, but the fact you enjoyed it, means so much to me :)
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Re: brother
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by matlock on
Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 11:34:41 PM AEST
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Thank you so very much! I never thought I would share my writings with others, but knowing you connected and enjoyed it is amazing.
R
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Re: brother
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by matlock on
Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 07:24:04 AM AEST
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I am so glad you enjoyed it, thank you.
R
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