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The Mosaic of Life
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:19:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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here i lay
tear stained
blood shed
bleeding for you
yearning for what has been left unsaid
my heart, it beats no longer.
i try to tell myself, those years are gone
and i will never have them back
scilence creeps, stillness seeps
my body cold
frozen in eternity, stuck in this flashback
long forgotten shame and deception
hath my life
shattered, insanity smiles coyly
like the broken bits of tile
dead eyes stare up into yours
my frayed soul to wander aimlessy
for your love to bloom, someones eternal
leave my soul to rest, move on.
for i am frozen in this mosaic
called life
Copyright ©
TwEeK
... [
2004-11-13 23:19:44]
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Re: The Mosaic of Life
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:26:51 PM AEST
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| brilliant. i loved this one. very intriguing and very well presented. i liked how you didnt set out to rhyme in this, im still compeled to do that in mine. |
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Re: The Mosaic of Life
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by BrookeStar on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 12:19:31 AM AEST
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| ~WoW~ Awsome poem I likes alot |
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Re: The Mosaic of Life
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by visualizing_life on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 11:11:35 PM AEST
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| very interesting but i like |
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Re: The Mosaic of Life
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:49:28 AM AEST
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seet write mine dont ryhime eather well g2g bye
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