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Slave To your Love
Contributed by
secretwind
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Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:37:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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What's that
what did you say?
I never thought
It could be done that way,
OOOH
your hands are cold
the pleasure is so strong
but you gotta let it go,
stop that
sssh
somebodies coming
I love it when you do that
but why can't you wait?
Yes I love you babe
but I gotta tell yoou
it feels so strange
to be on my knees
tied up this way
as you're very slowly
teasing me
pleasing me
making say your name.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2004-11-13 21:37:47]
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Re: Slave To your Love
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by Kie on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:20:18 AM AEST
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Help me...I have my mind in the gutter I think.
It says this is insomniac poetry and I am thinking sensual....
In a dry spell, it really emphasizes this to me.
*Wipes brow*
Excellent piece by the way.
Kie |
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Re: Slave To your Love
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:15:05 PM AEST
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*shivers* Oooook *shivers some more*
beautful imagery, i f***in loved this (sorry to swear big people) but that was so cool. |
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Re: Slave To your Love
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by emystar on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 04:52:18 PM AEST
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I see u watch Jerry Springer too. smile
I found this one to be humerous.
Luv the way u jus pull one into you with your writes.
U definently got it going on my handsome Prince
Luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Slave To your Love
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by emystar on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 04:52:23 PM AEST
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I see u watch Jerry Springer too. smile
I found this one to be humerous.
Luv the way u jus pull one into you with your writes.
U definently got it going on my handsome Prince
Luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Slave To your Love
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by Deathly_Rose on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:07:11 PM AEST
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Very well written.
brings you to a different place.
Love this poem
keep up the great writes
*Alicia~* |
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