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Crimson Violin Melody
Contributed by
Quilted_rag_doll
on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:17:21 PM in AEST
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I play a melody, sad and soft,
across my scarred wrists.
My blade is my bow, smoothly gliding,
producing a sweet crimson song.
My melody soars through the air,
filling it with its sweet notes.
My bow moves like lightning,
as the songs tempo increases.
It is fueled by hatred and sadness,
as the blade tears my flesh to ribbons.
Softly, slowly, movement subsides,
as the last fading notes, echo in the darkness.
[......]
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2004-11-13 21:17:21]
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Re: Crimson Violin Melody
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:28:15 PM AEST
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its not my best....i was reading a poem, and came across the word 'melody'
and the title of this poem just popped in my head. from there i just wrote
what came to me, and what i felt. |
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Re: Crimson Violin Melody
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by Kie on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:24:31 AM AEST
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I was drawn to the title because I love musical instruments. This is one of the most stark and powerful poems I have read in a long, long time. I never thought of a violin and the bow in a self inflicted sort of pain way.
This one got to me...
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