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Internet Junkie
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
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Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:56:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Nothing more than
An Internet Junkie
Claiming nothingness
As my home.
Addicted to the pixels
That fall before my eyes
Forever craving one more minute
Another instant to be lost
Within such emptiness.
Too scared to delve
Into the real world
Finding solace amidst
Infinite cyber-space.
Feeding off the emissions
Of those unknown:
Serial killers, rapists, terrorists…?
Pouring my heart out
To such random people
Whom at my discretion
Forever disappear
With the click of a button.
And I call out to you:
Security net! so weakly strung
I beg of you, Don’t fail me now!
I live through your lifelessness
And should you break,
So shall I
Cutting off, the weakest ties.
Copyright ©
cuddlytiger17
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2004-11-13 20:56:35]
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Re: Internet Junkie
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:00:52 PM AEST
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O_O
*knows this feeling*
*lives it*
Well. I can't describe what I think about this...just that it's a good write (Though I know that's not very helpful)
*hugs*
Phil xxx
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Re: Internet Junkie
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by surge_joebot on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:46:42 PM AEST
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I know EXACTLY how you feel, withouth the internet i would have nothing cause slowly ive lost all my friends in the real world and "thought" i gained so much more on here, but its just as scarey some days.
good poem,
cheers
demelza |
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Re: Internet Junkie
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:58:20 PM AEST
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Ha Ha,this is oh so true.love the line "too scared into delve in the real world"Great flow,good topic,well done.
The Wind.... |
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Re: Internet Junkie
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by TwEeK on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:23:04 PM AEST
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o.0 whoa, you like, opened me up and figured out what makes me tick!
im scared now...::shuffles into corner::
wow! wonderfull poem! liked it lots!
truly how and who i am!
thanks!
-Tweek
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Re: Internet Junkie
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by pixie on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 05:44:15 AM AEST
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wow that was amazing, so true and so many can relate lol
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Internet Junkie
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by theMoth on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 03:51:25 PM AEST
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Very impressed with it.
It's not just one-dimensional
about being on the internet and
wasting time having fun.
Very thought provoking
about who you are dealing with
out there.
ANd the end was dramatically
effective.
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Re: Internet Junkie
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by Whitelightning77 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:44:52 PM AEST
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well written concept of the struggle that many have - one of two hats we wear - the one where we are hidden and just fonts on the screen and the one where we wish we were sometimes hidden in real life
thanks for sharing!!
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