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Invisible Truth
Contributed by
lost_word
on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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It's not going to solve the PROBLEM
A bullet from me / A bullet from you
We're both dead now
What does that prove
Fight fire with fire
The flames only grow higher
" It'll create peace in the world "
You are such a LIER
Violence will always reign
Only you as a person can CHANGE
As for the world
It's sad to say
But it will remain
FOREVER INSANE
Copyright ©
lost_word
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2002-11-21 07:20:00]
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Re: Invisible Truth
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 10:35:53 AM AEST
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I like this one, it's short, simple and
to the point, even though it's under
fantasy some of it has so much truth
to it, I enjoyed this one alot, Thanks
for sharing it, Keep em' coming
Oh hey and the title of it fits it
real nicely!!!
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Invisible Truth
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by Roshie on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:25:11 AM AEST
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| Very well written, I enjoyed this one a lot. It's the sad truth though, you are a good writer. I can't wait to read some more! :) |
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Re: Invisible Truth
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by DOCTERKRISITN on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 03:18:41 PM AEST
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wow that is really good i really like that
damn that was good |
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