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Save Me
Contributed by
caughtinadream
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Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:18:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I want to feel needed
To feel that special touch
My love completely exceded
I want to feel the rush.
Not sure what is true
Yet I give my heart to you.
I place it on the line
Will you stand the test of time?
With shackles on my feet
I slowly bend down
You're the only one who can save me
Before I hit the ground.
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caughtinadream
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2004-11-13 20:18:34]
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Re: Save Me
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:39:08 PM AEST
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This is an awesome write......I think we all want to feel needed...
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Re: Save Me
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 02:48:00 PM AEST
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Great write...
~!*!~hugs~!*!~
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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