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Naked I Lay
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 01:45:58 PM in AEST
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In this life naked I lay,
Vulnerable & right in harms way,
Unprotected from the harsh world,
I feel & look just like a little girl.
I have nowhere to run & hide,
I am shaking & very frightened inside,
I am surrounded by demons & ghosts,
A poison pen letter waits in my post.
Naked I lay like a new born babe,
Feeling the force of the vicious tirade,
Stripped bare of love & caring,
In my eyes all my fears are staring.
I reach out in search of some cover,
For the comfort of the arms of a lover,
But alone I am so very alone,
All that’s around is loneliness dulcet tone.
I lay there curled up in a ball so tight,
My fear always seems to get worse at night,
My body shivers as I wallow in my tears,
I curl up even tighter as the terrors come near.
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2004-11-13 13:45:58]
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Re: Naked I Lay
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by kaitolyn on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 03:18:36 PM AEST
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i thought the poem was written well.
i could envision everything.
good job! |
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Re: Naked I Lay
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 03:20:15 PM AEST
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Awwww..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Naked I Lay
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 03:41:34 PM AEST
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oh hun i wish i could cheer you up, theres a lot of sunshine outside here right now, so im sending it to you:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Naked I Lay
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 06:07:16 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry...
This is such a well written poem. All of the emotions are expressed with so much talent and sincerity. When a poem causes you to feel at least a fraction of the emotions the poet did when contriving it, you know its a good poem. |
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Re: Naked I Lay
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:15:03 PM AEST
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Such saddness in your flow,well written.
And remember,you are not alone.
SecretWind...... |
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Re: Naked I Lay
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by jonteD on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:41:47 PM AEST
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| Cry not, just keep writing. |
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