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Is My Mascara Running?
Contributed by
Rxqueen
on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:04:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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I don't want these paths of teardrop trips
wiped away by my own fingertips
leaving trails in my foundation
showing signs of my desperation.
I want to be able to give a true smile
one that comes like a good friend
and stays for a while.
I need to be loved,
but not a love like this
there is more to love than a hug
and a kiss
Grateful?
yes, maybe I should be
for I know there are people who go to bed alone
but you can be in love
and still be alone
When your love seeps out,
weeps out,
trails down your face...
lingers on your chin...
then plummits to the ground
not making a sound,
never reaching its home
yes,
you are alone
I want to love someone
who loves me
not my beauty
not my smile
but my soul
greedy?
Fine, I may be
for there are those with no one to hold
but why hold on to someone
who is empty,
shallow,
and cold?
I don't want these paths of teardrop trips
wiped away by my own fingertips
leaving trails in my foundation,
little maps of my desperation.
I want to be able to give a deep smile
one that comes like a true friend
and stays for a while.
I am sorry for those who have less
I don't ask for pity
for I created this mess
but now to you I must confesss
I only wish I had one more chance
to find a glimpse of happiness...
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
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2004-11-13 10:04:18]
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by taryn on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:34:34 AM AEST
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| I really like your poems. great write! |
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:37:26 AM AEST
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beautiful write, rx... you have really touched my heart... being a military wife is never easy..
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by Avis_Nigra on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:51:26 AM AEST
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| wow. no other comment necessary. thank you for sharing! |
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:03:57 AM AEST
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| So beautifully written, I felt the outpour of emotions, and sorrows flow, and saw the visions imprinted from within, you have shown me something not many see, strength of character...and I wish for you that your day gets better, and love shines once again in your life....bright enough too dry the misery and fill your face with a smile to rival all happiness. |
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by kaitolyn on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:10:35 AM AEST
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that is a really beautiful poem.
it's written really well.
& it's very deep.
cheer up! :) |
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by CAUGHTinAdream on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:12:48 AM AEST
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| All i can say is wow. This really came from the heart and i felt the emotion in it. It really touched me, I loved it. Great Job! |
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by pixie on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:01:43 PM AEST
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wow that was deep and emotional, great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by winged on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:36:16 PM AEST
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| A wonderfully written, powerful poem. Thank you so much for sharing it with us! |
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:42:09 PM AEST
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| Hey Sweet One!!! Another extraordinary poem. I love your poems, they show me meaning great job. *Hugs* |
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:42:27 PM AEST
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| Hey Sweet One!!! Another extraordinary poem. I love your poems, they show me meaning great job. *Hugs* |
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 05:15:47 PM AEST
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| this was a great write. |
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:05:15 AM AEST
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I'm sure you'll get your wish granted.
Brittle and emotive - I was moved through your words. .. |
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 04:43:01 AM AEST
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Wow all i can say is wow *speechless on Jocelyns Emotions*
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:19:46 PM AEST
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You have alot of Comments lol well here is another one lol well This is a great Poem very very Deep I love this part I want to love
someone
who loves me
not my beauty
not my smile
but my soul
greedy?
I love that well,This is a Great Write !!! |
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Re: Is My Mascara Running?
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by shattered_heart on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:37:51 PM AEST
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I have felt the same way. You can always tell when I girl is sad in a relationship. If she has little grey left-over lines on her face. Don't worry hun, real love will come your way one day, and those little grey lines will represent happiness instead of pain. Good write.
- Rachelle |
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