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50-50
Contributed by
MomentInTime
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Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 01:46:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Ours does mean yours and mine
(well at least it has been thus
for time eternal as is known)
until of course we come to us.
When it comes to you and I
it has been true for quite some time
that we set out as 50-50
but your half’s bigger than is mine.
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MomentInTime
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2004-11-13 01:46:46]
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Re: 50-50
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by girish on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 03:36:44 AM AEST
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let it be 100-0 and 0 for you so that you can take 70/80/90/100 from ur person..
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Re: 50-50
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by Flipped_out on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 07:36:25 AM AEST
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Woooah had to read this real slow Jordy, bit of a puzzle with my english..I think I 'get it'..very clever..I like this
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Re: 50-50
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:57:37 AM AEST
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clever, creative, and the end is just too cute:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: 50-50
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 07:55:22 PM AEST
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| well, I decided I was leaving..but this was just too cute not to comment.. I love it. I'm making a trip to NZ soon and maybe Australia too.. maybe I'll look you up..and down..lol. great write. 5* |
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Re: 50-50
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:16:53 AM AEST
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Thats not what she says to me
she likes my half to be bigger
good job
with guy he'll give you 100%
but your not looking he'll take 60 back |
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