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In teh Middle of Two Loves
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:44:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Torn between two lovers
To choose what I must do
Both have other girlfriends
Both have tried to be untrue
What am I to do?
Am I the one to blame?
Here I am single, forgotten
When these lovers come to play
Silly me, I love them both
But I can't get in the way
For I know what it's like to feel the pain
Of a heart that's been betrayed
So I'll sit back in the dark
For I don't want to cause a break up
And all the while I'll be wishing
That there's still a chance for them to make up
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2004-11-12 22:44:28]
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Re: In teh Middle of Two Loves
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by Sholdershy on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 03:30:35 AM AEST
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Great Job!!!!!
Short and to the point. I enjoyed it alot. Your poem flowed together nicely. |
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Re: In teh Middle of Two Loves
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 05:22:06 PM AEST
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| great rhyme |
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