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I Can't Become Her
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:33:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I can't become her
I just can't do it
I can't be the girl that's in the way
Be the one that takes your love away
From the one that you're with now
I can't become her
I just can't stoop that low
I can't be the girl that you want
When with you I am not
For I've been in the other's shoes
I've been the one that was cheated on
I've been the one that did no wrong
I've stayed up to cry all night
Because lovers never treat me right
So I just can't become her
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2004-11-12 22:33:18]
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Re: I Can't Become Her
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:21:17 PM AEST
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I know this strory to well from my past and god does it hurt when you fall in love with them. Not knowing when you willl see them again. Xmas alone birthdays. Candle light dinners ruin with a tel call to day they can make it . No you are thinking clearly and understand the pain it causes
Fabulous write from your heart
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: I Can't Become Her
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:31:56 AM AEST
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| very powerful write..i liked this one |
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Re: I Can't Become Her
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 08:18:33 PM AEST
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| Written from the heart, good job. |
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