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The Fire Inside
Contributed by
taryn
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Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:45:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Fire exposed to water,
covered completely,
and the flame goes out.
People need something to burn off too,
something to keep the fire going.
A candle burns and burns until the wick withers away,
And we go and go until we are well.....gone.
So without a fire,
we're not much of anything.
Copyright ©
taryn
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2004-11-12 21:45:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Fire Inside
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:08:51 PM AEST (User
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Well, even after our 'fire' has gone out and life has ended, we are still a memory to someone who cared. Memories don't fade away. They may get a little misty over the years but they never fade away.
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Rita |
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Re: The Fire Inside
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:37:34 PM AEST (User
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good write. |
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