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Finding Shelter
Contributed by
thereturnofx7
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Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:39:46 PM in AEST
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Tiny chambers within my heart scarred black reopen for you
Hoping the tenderness of your touch will rid it of scarred tissues
Macabre melodies still trying to trigger sorrowful dischord within
Slowly becomeing replaced by mellowed love songs once again
Quietly restoring beauty to places long hidden away
Within secret gardens of emotion, a rose for each passing day
That even the smallest thought of you has passed through
Giving me a reason to smile and begin each day anew
Finding a shelter from the cold sting of the rain in your arms
Fallen victim to the staggering sweetness of your charms
Locking me within an endless gaze into your eyes
The warmth of your kiss becoming my humble prize
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Re: Finding Shelter
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:18:03 PM AEST
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Welcome home, Jase.... Good to see you again and with such a beautiful, happy and positive poem...
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Re: Finding Shelter
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:59:38 PM AEST
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| Good write. |
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Re: Finding Shelter
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by Sinned on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 10:41:55 AM AEST
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You scored. Nice write
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Re: Finding Shelter
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:57:54 PM AEST
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well written. So glad u've found a new love.
Hope it works out 4 u |
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Re: Finding Shelter
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by PoeticHybrid on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 05:43:28 AM AEST
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| Nice write |
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