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The scars she wears...
Contributed by
Unheard_Mute
on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:57:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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They mark her body, her arm, and her wrist,
Signatures of when she was forced to cry,
They mark the places where she has been kissed,
By death because she so wanted to die.
Hurt is the knife that tried to take her life,
Reality, and it's brutality,
Such a cruel, evil place has made her strife,
At least she feels good when she looks at me.
I am the one guy that has changed her mind,
Took her scar covered hand, showed her the love,
The one who chose not to leave her behind,
I see her as an angel from above.
I feel every emotion that she shares,
And I love her so, and the scars she wears...
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Re: The scars she wears...
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:13:11 PM AEST
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excellent sonnet, written well.
i take that your description telling jade to never do it again is referring to dont cut again. if i am wrong you can just disreguard what i say next from my assumption. maybe you could say this to her, "If you want to hurt someone, hurt me, not yourself. What you do to yourself causes me pain, because i can see that you dont deserve the blade, while you cant." |
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Re: The scars she wears...
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:32:59 PM AEST
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| awesome, i love it |
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Re: The scars she wears...
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:01:30 PM AEST
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The relationship you have with this girl seems like a story
I hope it has a happy ending
very good
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Re: The scars she wears...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:39:31 PM AEST
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| love is a bunch of bull*****... man... but good poem. |
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Re: The scars she wears...
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by killingmehslowly on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:55:18 PM AEST
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| most awesome. You know how i feel about all your poetry. You're like a poetry god. *nods* |
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Re: The scars she wears...
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by Tru2Myself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 03:16:44 PM AEST
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This is really really good. I love it. haha i and i agree with killingmehslowly...your a poetry god. haha.
Lots of love
Lauren ( AGAIN!! :O! ) |
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