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The Sad Poem
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:13:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The sadness that I feel
I cannot begin to describe.
I only know this feeling
is trapped deep inside.
My world is so cold and dark
light I cannot see.
A saddened person
I'll always be.
I cry salty tears
no one sees.
This prison I'm in
Will never set me free.
Curled up in a ball
I slowly die.
Never really knowing
the real reason why.
A helpless child
I have become.
Waitng for entry in
my Fathers black kingdom.
Copyright ©
deadheadpoet
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2004-11-12 20:13:06]
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Re: The Sad Poem
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by Gir_3 on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:41:33 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, I understand your hurt...but there Iam sure you can look on the bright side of the shadow! If not, dont do anything your gonna regret. I love this one tho, it has meaning! |
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Re: The Sad Poem
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by cocacola1331 on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:57:08 PM AEST
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| That indeed is a sad poem, but very beautifully written. I understand what you're going through (although I don't exactly know WHAt you're going through, I know how it feels to be hurt), as I am going through a very rough time right now. I'm glad that you've gotten through everything, and I really hope you keep on writing! You've got talent, this poem flows without seeming to be 'overdone'.... nice one. |
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Re: The Sad Poem
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by Evilnn on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:26:17 PM AEST
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Very emotional poem
It's how I feel now
Thanks for sharing this great poem
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Re: The Sad Poem
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:34:12 PM AEST
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| beautiful.. touching |
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Re: The Sad Poem
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:55:10 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: The Sad Poem
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by pixie on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:12:50 PM AEST
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wow that was emotional and sad, moving poem,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Sad Poem
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by EternalNight4x on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:06:18 PM AEST
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| very deep and well expressed poem...keep posting |
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