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Jagged Redundancy (crease'ed season change)
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 07:43:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Yellow water creamy flowing
oh down smooth pebbles pebbles
turning blue turning red
turning me
into indecision and...
I am jagged redundancy
clear as water icicles
will shimmer shine and
break, clear as
lava boils will bubble and blister and bleed
clear as
indecision?
Watch this rectangular body
convusle and vibrate,
amid orange and evergreen leaves,
wrinkled crease'ed season change
coarse manipulation.
Again, I am
jagged redundancy
flowing among red water water
H20
watch me will I ever turn
blue and/or green and
oval...
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2004-11-12 19:43:11]
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Re: Jagged Redundancy (crease'ed season change)
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:33:14 PM AEST
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| You guys are f.ucking retards >:| why dont you f.ucking comment? |
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Re: Jagged Redundancy (crease'ed season change)
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by WildfireRose on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:58:57 PM AEST
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Hey Lane,
IT was a very well written poem, but where the hell are you?? You are not online and you don't answer my e-mails. I miss you, please write me....did I do soething to upset you??
Crystal |
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