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Out of Glow...
Contributed by
ronald
on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Our love is so strong,
But a destiny, so wrong,
And we have to leave it cold,
For a truth told.
What made my world spin,
What made our love win,
Now have to lose,
Only this to choose.
But it is out of will's power,
That brought us to this final hour,
That split love's road,
And end our love's ode;
It is just destiny's play,
And we have no more say,
Nothing left we can do now,
Goodbyes, we have to allow.
But please, give me one more kiss,
A last moment of bliss,
Before we let go,
And leave it... out of glow...
Forever... out of glow...
Copyright ©
ronald
... [
2002-11-21 05:00:00]
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Re: Out of Glow...
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 05:54:49 PM AEST
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Damn I know that feeling. Awesome write. It got to me!!
~ MoonlitAngel |
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Re: Out of Glow...
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 09:19:04 AM AEST
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| ooooh now i really love this one. i love the way you said it. its pretty and good! |
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Re: Out of Glow...
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 08:31:25 AM AEST
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| Yeah, I caught that episode too - it's so obvious that they're soulmates. This is mesmerizing in a very sentimental way. Kudos! |
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