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Exhausted Existence
Contributed by
DesperateSoul
on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 06:11:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Exhausted Existence
Rescue me from myself,
i'm driving Me insane......
Being so alone,
cover me in your Brilliance,
break my wall of stone.....
Searching for you
endlessly,
pursuing companionship
relentlessly,
being betrayed and mislead
instead,
but I go on hopelessly......
Inspiration and motivation
have escaped my heart,
Pathetically and reluctantly
trying to believe,
there is someone who can
fill the empty parts and
help me make A fresh start.
Defying myself,
ignoring my instincts,
trudging through betrayal
and deciet
to find my missing link..
"impossible"!!! I scream
to my mind,
impatient and weary,
feeling left behind....
Ready to quit and
desperate,
full of Self-Pity, remorse,
and regret,
telling my soul,
"It's not out there,because
you've been Vagabonding
all your life and haven't
found anything yet"........
I was planted in the womb
as a seed of Neglect and
irrelevance,
Which reflect's in my image
of A
Derelict with no Intelligence......
by: $av $auci ~*~906~*~ >3
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DesperateSoul
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2004-11-12 18:11:08]
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Re: Exhausted Existence
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by buccaneer on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 07:01:56 PM AEST
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| this is great i can relate well to what u are saying.it's lovely. wishi could write so plain. |
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Re: Exhausted Existence
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by LEMMEN on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:27:59 PM AEST
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So much emotion with your ryme this night. So much pain you ask the question is some one out there. I believe in words, Words spoken, Words said, Words written. You have a ture gift of words even though they are sad and lonely they send a message. You are a gifted "POET" Keep on writing sharing your gift. This gift of words you have. For then one day someone will see. That is was you they were looking for. Best Wishes.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Exhausted Existence
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 11:14:12 AM AEST
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beautifully sad
written as only a fellow crippled pilgrim
could have.
yes
I feel your on this one.
Tje Wind..... |
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