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Right & Wrong
Contributed by
DesperateSoul
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Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 05:46:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Right & Wrong...
It's A fine line
between right & wrong.
Wrong makes the pain
go away,
right, you've rarely seen,
so to you in your world,
it just doesnt belong.
The wrong is full of way's
to ecscape,
wrong gives you strength,
to daily watch your soul
being raped,
wrong allows you to act
without thinking,
wrong, is the needle sinking
into your flesh,
wrong is the rush,
eyes wide not blinking.
Wrong is all you've ever
known,
wrong were all the examples
of life you were shown......
Wrong to have grown up
Alone,
wrong to be born behind
walls of stone,
Pre destined to spend
ETERNITY,
A caged bird that's never
flown....................
by: $av Sauci*~ **~~906~~** (*~510~*)
Copyright ©
DesperateSoul
... [
2004-11-12 17:46:42]
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Re: Right & Wrong
(User Rating: 1 )
by kaitolyn on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 05:59:28 PM AEST
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i really like this.
i think it's written well. |
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Re: Right & Wrong
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by theMoth on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 07:33:08 PM AEST
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I liked it.
--Mothy |
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