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Sands
Contributed by
ronald
on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 04:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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Soundlessly, the sands fall down,
As decay manifests by stealth,
Upon the specks of the Earth,
Not one left out by its grip.
Fearlessly, they just march on,
Not knowing the games of sands,
Unleash, shadows of remorse,
That negates point of return.
Though wisdom unveils its web,
Gems amidst are placed aside,
As if sands will not run out,
Denying its echoes of behest!
Alas, only thirst they gain,
Aftermath of fantasies,
Of charming whispers rushing,
Within, it is mere illusion.
However, wisdom beholds,
The window to radiant glory,
That holds for eternity,
Where unending haven blooms...
Copyright ©
ronald
... [
2002-11-21 04:40:00]
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Re: Sands
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 06:24:54 AM AEST
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| Very nicely done,I liked this! Christina |
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Re: Sands
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:59:22 AM AEST
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its good to see some one else besides myself that actually writes out side of the norm.
Ali |
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Re: Sands
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by OreO on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 02:30:21 PM AEST
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This was so creative and different
I really enjoyed this one, it had me
thinking each time it said sands
and specks as to which one
meant time and people lol but
i really did enjoy this one. Thanks
for sharing it, it's unique
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Sands
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by Mad-Mancunian on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 04:51:41 AM AEST
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That's another good one.
Please check my peom "wheels of Time ", and tell me what you think! |
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