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AUTUMN SONG
Contributed by
ladydp2000
on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 05:09:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Poised hands softly alight
As songs all of sudden here take flight .
Twirling leaves dancing all the time
Making hearts like mine and yours rhyme
Autumn gives us thrills to match a sight
Trees dresses quite delight.
Glowing rays non-stop in the moonlight
In love two souls are last re-unite...
As songs perpetually sweetly were sung
With tuned violins and flutes, perfectly strung...
Capturing seasons' golden treasures
With love given to you without measure!
Copyright ©
ladydp2000
... [
2004-11-12 17:09:00]
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Re: AUTUMN SONG
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by imnohbdy on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 06:27:19 PM AEST
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| This Is an exellent ways to combine and dress up two older theme's. I like the way that you worked the two in togther it had a feeling of a moment you where describing. However the use of the autum theme has been overdone from my perspective, and it was a tad cliche on your part other than that though I loved it. Also Love will never become cliche so write what your heart feel's and don't let me or anyone else tell you otherwise. |
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Re: AUTUMN SONG
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:55:41 PM AEST
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Autum song---I loved it to me it ran so smooth.I don't think any topic can be overdone.So many writers so many minds so many words different rymes.
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