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Suicide Tune
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 01:53:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Suicide plays in the background...
I cry out and twist and turn in pain.
Silently screaming my day away, to the awful suicide tune.
I want to run away from this, leave my pain there and run forever.
The loneliness is mounting, building and breaking.
I cant have what I want, and what I want isn't real.
You think this is funny to see me this desperate to die?
You laugh now, you see my face, cut and bleeding, crying.
Will you laugh the same way when I'm dead?
When the suicide tune plays no more, and the blood never makes the pain stop.
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2004-11-12 13:53:59]
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Re: Suicide Tune
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 02:12:04 PM AEST
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great job bro...people don't seem to notice how we truly feel...they just laugh and tell you to get over it...but you can't....
please comment on my work too
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Re: Suicide Tune
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 04:12:20 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it! |
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