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Erotic Exorcism
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 01:41:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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Restless sleep interrupted
on a stormy autumn night.
Fingertips caressing me,
sensed, but not by sight.
Invisible hands glide over my breasts.
His treasure hides beneath them.
He reaches through the barricade and
holds the heart that needs him.
Unseen tears of passion
fall lightly on my chest.
I cherish every drop of them
as they absorb into my flesh.
His girth felt deep inside me,
brings pleasure so profound.
I open my eyes and realize
He's six feet underground.
His breath placed gently on my neck
as he whispers in my ear..
"Hush my love, don't weep for me
Ill return again next year"
I bow before my soul's sweet master
and plead into the darkness..
"By next hollow's eve, My Dear,
will remain only my carcass"
A promise made in lightning flashes
that he will see me soon.
He answers me in thunder crashes
as his spirit leaves my room....
"No need to wait so long, My dear,
to taste my sweet affections.
If you wish to visit me,
Ill grant you these directions.....
Pass the tombstones,
enter my gates
and lay upon my sepulcher.
Summon me with your dieing soul,
and I will surely help her."
Copyright ©
vampyrekiss
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2004-11-12 13:41:59]
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Re: Erotic Exorcism
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by surge_joebot on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 01:58:57 PM AEST
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| that was really really cool - you did a great job |
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Re: Erotic Exorcism
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 03:16:38 PM AEST
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Ah, such dark beauty... So deliciously morbid... A passion that will never die, I'm sure. Incredible piece, vampyrekiss. Very profound. I'm a great fan of obscure writes and creatures, lol. Loved this piece! Beautiful write! Thank you so much for sharing! It seems so far away, next Hollow's Eve... Maybe he shall return earlier. Absolutely flawless write, my friend! You'll be seeing more of me! Much love! Forever,
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Re: Erotic Exorcism
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 03:37:21 PM AEST
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| Amazing poem... Beautifully written. |
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Re: Erotic Exorcism
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by Deathly_Rose on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:01:11 PM AEST
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wow
that was a truely awesome written poem! *jumps for joy* ^.^
I really enjoyed reading this poem, so dark, yet so alive and real.
keep up the good work
*~Alicia~* |
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