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My thought's, my life
Contributed by
givingin
on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 01:08:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My Thoughts, My Life
Dazed and confused,
of this world that I’m in,
loved and abused,
in this world full of sin.
Now as you read this,
I want you to know,
that these are my thoughts,
that I can now show.
Sometimes bewildered,
just thinking” not right”,
I watch on the news,
as they kill and they fight.
Sometimes at home,
I sit and I cry,
watching my life,
as it passes me by.
Hoping you’re there,
to whisk me away,
I pray you return,
if just for one day.
The place that I live,
is a druggy old town,
though I still do good,
I still feel down.
I may do some things,
illegal and wrong,
but I’m still a good person,
and I still stand strong.
Some people may love me,
and some people may hate,
I still do my best,
cause in the end it’s too late.
I know there is hate,
I know people fight,
but they can be saved,
if they com into the light.
Is there really a god,?
this I don’t know,
is the devil for real?
or are they just for show.
So be brave for yourself,
don’t let life fade away,
continue to fight,
for you shall win some day.
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givingin
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Re: My thought's, my life
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by pixie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 01:19:50 PM AEST
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good write, flow was spot on and it kept me intrested right til the end,
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Re: My thought's, my life
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 02:23:22 PM AEST
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interesting write bro...
please comment on my work too
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Re: My thought's, my life
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by Evilnn on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 05:45:12 PM AEST
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Great write
I really liked this poem
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Re: My thought's, my life
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 06:21:49 PM AEST
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givingin
Confused--naw your just normal.This poem speaks a lot of you and I believe there is a God and that He allows us to doubt and question Him.I do suggest you pray God lead me where You want me to be and I think He will. We are all spcial to Him.
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