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A Darker Shade Of Black
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 12:38:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I have turned a darker shade of black,
On me my thoughts have launched an attack,
I lay here silent & curled in a ball,
Trying to make my ugliness so very small.
Never again will I feel love or compassion,
Believe me I didn’t want this to happen,
But it has, it is out of my control,
I am just another discarded, empty soul.
My eyes are no just hollow little pits,
Down my middle is where my personality splits,
Half of me is a monster the other has no face,
I have been cast down into this dark place.
Down here no-one can hear my screams,
No-one can see their knives as they gleam,
Please someone help me as I start to bleed,
Please someone stop them as they carry out their deed.
I lay here shaking in a pool of my own blood,
They set me alight just like a piece of wood,
I can feel the life draining right from me,
I have suffered alone & not one person did see.
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pixie
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2004-11-12 12:38:00]
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Re: A Darker Shade Of Black
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by a_bear on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 12:53:19 PM AEST
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| Some people say if life gives you lemons make lemon aide..I say if life gives your personality the splits..make a banana ..split! I know..it's pretty lame..:-/ lol... |
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Re: A Darker Shade Of Black
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by secretwind on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 01:11:12 PM AEST
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Once again your flow is sweetly dark and from the shadows I applaud.Well written.
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Re: A Darker Shade Of Black
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 03:04:06 PM AEST
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Someone watched as you suffered my dear friend...and shed a thousand tears for every one of yours. ;o)
You are a wonderful person and dont you forget it ((( Pixie)))
Roses
Larry
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Re: A Darker Shade Of Black
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by LoelIntrepid on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 03:53:50 PM AEST
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| Yes well writen |
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Re: A Darker Shade Of Black
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by little_genna on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 04:15:31 PM AEST
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i love this poem, i felt every word of its dark flow, guess thats because i am in a very dark mood. but nonetheless as alway it is a well written poem. well done krissie
take care
Gen xx |
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Re: A Darker Shade Of Black
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by Evilnn on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 05:08:24 PM AEST
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great write
I can relate and I wish the best for you
Be strong and take care
eve |
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Re: A Darker Shade Of Black
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by inoc on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 05:52:01 AM AEST
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be strong Pixie
your write was written with that fabulous talented flow....well written
hope you can soon find a different shade of colour.......?
cheers~
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Re: A Darker Shade Of Black
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:50:58 AM AEST
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so sad................. hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A Darker Shade Of Black
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by pander on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:30:34 PM AEST
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Yet another wonderfully written piece Pixie.
Well done on another great write!
Luv,
Pander
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