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I'm not crazy! I'm not crazy...!!!!!!!!!!!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 12:15:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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You think I’m depressed!
Well have a merit ‘coz you noticed!
Only, one little problem, I’ve had enough!
I won’t try. Trying takes too much.
I just want to write! And draw a ‘dead me’
I don’t even care, if you see.
I’ll draw me dead in pool of blood.
I wish I didn’t have to. I wish I could just be under stood.
But no, I’ll draw myself there.
Just don’t pretend that you care!
I’ll draw the tools I’ll use.
Make people feel mega confused.
‘Coz they won’t get why I did this.
They never seem to get why I hiss.
I sit drawing and writing it all…
Some black tears begin to fall.
I blink my eyes and they disappear.
They’re no longer here.
You’re saying, I need to listen now.
People are laughing and I just frown.
No! I won’t stop ‘coz this is my ‘suicide note’.
‘Coz when I die, you’ll cry, if the reason’s unknown.
No! I won’t stop. ‘Coz this is my final good bye!
Why remove me from the class? I’m NOT depressed alright!
I’m not crazy dammit! Why are you saying that you care?
You’re NOT doing me a favor! Making them THINK I’m not all here…
Making them think that i'm unstable, I can't help wanting to die.
But it DOESN'T mean i'm depressed! I'm just not feeling ALIVE!
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deathdrop
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2004-11-12 12:15:50]
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Re: I'm not crazy! I'm not crazy...!!!!!!!!!!!
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by pixie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 12:18:08 PM AEST
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to me this is a very unstable and crying for help write, you seem so very confused, i hope things become clearer for you soon,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: I'm not crazy! I'm not crazy...!!!!!!!!!!!
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 12:33:56 PM AEST
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| Yet another amazing write... Intense and emotional. |
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Re: I'm not crazy! I'm not crazy...!!!!!!!!!!!
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by LEMMEN on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 02:31:49 PM AEST
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Judgement people alway asking if i'm depressed then they ask the question why. Never letting me answer passing judgement. And they wounder why. I like your write it was very emoational. You have a great talent shareing your thoughts and fears. You not crazy. Just have to much pain to bare.
"NICE WRITE" "deathdrop"
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: I'm not crazy! I'm not crazy...!!!!!!!!!!!
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:39:20 PM AEST
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| amazing write full of emotions. written very well. powerful. never stop trying when youre disatisfied... |
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