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Lying Between The Thick Air of Darkness
Contributed by
Pyrofungus
on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:45:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We’ll watch the stars shine
Lying between the thick air of darkness
Holding one another
Feeding off our most inner desires
Stalking each other’s moves
Eyes watery with our most passionate faults
Faults of you and me
Whispers that are so sudden
Shivering beneath our skin
Crying to get out and breathe
Needing air…needing life…
Thriving off each others shivering breath
As the steam blows through the air
The moon slowly passes us by
Leaving the stars behind
To glisten in our watery eyes
So cold…so warm…
Speaking through our skin
That whispers so silently
Between the thick air of darkness
That we lye between
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Pyrofungus
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2004-11-12 11:45:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lying Between The Thick Air of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:47:55 AM AEST (User
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a very beautiful write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Lying Between The Thick Air of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Angel_Eyez on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:32:10 AM AEST (User
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i really like this one it feel intimate - very clever i think
well done
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