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Critically Insane
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
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Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:28:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Critically insane, the doctors said.
Severe depression, theres alot of things in her head.
Second thoughts about life, wondering if she should use a knife.
What happened to this child, my mother declared.
She use to be perfect in everyway, this is not fair.
Well life isn't fair, and neither is your brain.
It seems she has died inside from all the pain.
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Re: Critically Insane
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by pixie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:32:03 AM AEST
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that was a good write, written well, very sad,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Critically Insane
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by Corona on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:44:21 AM AEST
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| I like this one...my kind of writing! |
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Re: Critically Insane
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:01:12 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. the tone in this was unique and expressed well. |
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Re: Critically Insane
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by LEMMEN on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:31:07 PM AEST
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Such deep feelings so much pain. Just wish they would stop calling me insane. I liked this write very deep like your pain. my mother declared She use to be perfect in everyway,
Such words to hear from a parent. no wounder they think we are insane. May they take the time to listen. May they take the time to care. Keep on writting it helps it has me.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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