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uncle sams gift
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:12:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
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last time your mother looked into your eyes they silently spoke
to return to her again but now she cannot even touch your hair.
chosen to be the right hand of the stars as eagles fly over alaska
i would like to take away your darkness and return your lifesun.
three months turned into forgotton pancakes and still you were
away from everyone and everything you loved more than sand.
dead pumpkins are everywhere and an upcoming feast you
will not attend, sad eyes tearful in memory of your beauty.
on your coffin kid, you have a draped red, white and blue
for your bravery and courage that is what america gave you.
§* *§
*|*
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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Re: uncle sams gift
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by pixie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:13:48 AM AEST
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wow nessa, this was powerful to say the least and then some, very emotional write,
takecare,
pixie xx *hugs* |
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by Flipped_out on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:15:27 AM AEST
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Ladyfawn...wow!!!..I do not have the words to do this justice...totally awesome,
Like life goes on, but we keep the memories
Thankyou
Kelly x |
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Re: uncle sams gift
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 12:43:46 PM AEST
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So very beautiful and so sad.
May i send my blessings to you and your family
Lots of love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: uncle sams gift
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by a_bear on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 12:50:26 PM AEST
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| I still have goose bumps..this is so very touching. |
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Re: uncle sams gift
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 04:37:17 PM AEST
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| you do it proud nessa!!!! |
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Re: uncle sams gift
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 06:16:14 PM AEST
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This is really beautiful mom, I especially like the last two lines, very cute. I don't have the words to say how happy I am to see you posting again.
Love always
- Becca
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Re: uncle sams gift
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by tifrob on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 07:15:34 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful tribute. it is also beautifully written. Ya did good...
J~ |
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:48:02 AM AEST
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So heart wrenchingly beautiful, words written with flowing love, and strength of emotions that truely care, Take care always, and may peace watch over you and your family.
Karl |
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:01:07 AM AEST
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What a wonderful write my friend.
Truely excellent!
Jeff |
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Re: uncle sams gift
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 04:03:11 PM AEST
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beautiful and heartfelt... I hope you didn't
actually lose someone though. In my opinion,
America s hould have stayed away from Iraq
it doesn't take a rocket scientist to know that
Iraq is worse off than it was 3 years ago and
that the situation is deteriorating more and
more every day. Once again a beautiful poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 05:38:28 PM AEST
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You're very talented,
and I admire what you do.
ALWAYS so good!
--Mothy |
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Re: uncle sams gift
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by venkat on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:12:19 AM AEST
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Thats really heart wrenching..so sad.. it fills tears in my eyes..hugs hugs my friend..
:-) venkat |
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by Aquaelius on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:15:24 PM AEST
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I kinda had to read the last 2 lines again. I just read them again. I know I'm saddened, but it's a proud saddened. I am proudly saddened. I enjoyed this.
Aq. |
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:25:52 PM AEST
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Oh nessa this is so touching.
Reaches out-n-grabs ones heart.
luv, huggs, smiles, Happy thanksgiving,
emy |
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by Willofree on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:36:10 AM AEST
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A beautifuily written tribute. It was very compelling.
A wonderful write
God Bless those who serve, and their families.
Willofree |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 11:15:17 AM AEST
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This is a miracle of poetic creation, simply wonderful words.
Johnny. |
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by Merry on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 04:17:51 PM AEST
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an amazing write - I do not condone war as it is always the young who die - the ones who have everyhting to live for.
Pray for peace
merry |
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 07:01:38 PM AEST
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pure power...raw and terrifying. There is no payment to make up for the loss of a young life.
Beautiful Nessa..so sad but so well written
Roses
Larry |
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Re: uncle sams gift
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:49:36 PM AEST
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| Nessa, this is such a heart wrenching piece. Tis very sad. I hope peace will come soon. *S* Cynthia |
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by outsider on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 05:19:44 AM AEST
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| Great write, the best thing ive read in some time. Take care. |
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 03:43:50 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa, this is so very heartfelt, touching and beautiful.
You are a true poet.
Stunning, my friend,
*hugs tons*
Phil xxx |
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Re: uncle sams gift
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by Alovinmann on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:25:57 PM AEST
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| HEAVY a change from your norm Happy New Year |
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Re: uncle sams gift
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:12:02 PM AEST
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Amazing and touching.
Spazzo |
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:25:34 AM AEST
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So many have died for a war away from their home, I hope in the end it was worth their sacrifice, I know honor plays a big part, but seen to many in the past forgotten by time.
Cool poem. |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:53:03 PM AEST
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| Heartbreaking, but sadly an all too true write. You expressed the pain well. Wonderful work. |
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:59:59 PM AEST
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I don't like war.
Scott |
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by hellsfallenangel on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 10:58:39 AM AEST
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its very good and its true to many have been forgotten thanks for the good read
DEMON |
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Re: uncle sams gift
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 01:31:18 AM AEST
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Ladyfawn
There will always be war and rummers of war.
The world groans.
These things must happen
Until "HE" comes
On the right hand of the "Father"
I see your sons
Lady fawn
I sincerly hope you haven't lost your son.
If you have I proudly thank you.
Sinned |
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Re: uncle sams gift
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 10:05:40 PM AEST
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| As all have said before me...this is a very heartfelt piece. The cost of war for us all is much to great to bare. |
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Re: uncle sams gift
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by colinb on
Tuesday, 15th July 2014 @ 04:22:29 PM AEST
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| Beautiful Nessa i think every one above i said what i agree with |
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