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The Mirror Reflection
Contributed by
screwup
on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:39:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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the crimson I see
it bleeds from her heart
blood red
I see it flow from her wrist
the metal in her hand tells the story
of a romantic suicide
tears are shed
that no one else can see
as she traces the blade
along her wrist
the crimson flows
in a tiny path
to form a little tiny puddle
set to form on the ground
she looks upon her dying face
in the mirror's refelction
and sees what is left of her soul
flooding through her dying body
her eyes, the color of honey,
are now empty
as they where before
she looks at them in the mirror's refelction
and as the lifeless tears pass down her face,
she realizes that she was already dead
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Re: The Mirror Reflection
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by pixie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:46:40 AM AEST
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that was really sad, very well expressed,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Mirror Reflection
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by Flipped_out on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:00:30 AM AEST
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Loved this..well expressed indeed..the last line is an awesome finish
ty
Kell x |
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Re: The Mirror Reflection
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:59:52 AM AEST
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quite alot of us seem dead already...very sad, but a great write...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: The Mirror Reflection
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:09:44 PM AEST
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| dark and powerful. |
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Re: The Mirror Reflection
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:29:27 AM AEST
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| Gripping and full of agony...submerged in a veil of sorrow, beautiful poem from a beautiful mind. |
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