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My Death Row Inmate
Contributed by
Corona
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Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:35:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I met you sort of late; I guess that’s our fate.
Day in day out you’re in a filthy cell, welcome to prison life hell.
You’re here today but gone tomorrow, the pain I feel the sorrow.
Why did I have to meet you this way, I just wish I could hold you at least one day.
If you only knew, how I’ve grown to love you.
The thought of you not being here, fills me with so much fear.
I just want to kiss your face and feel your embrace.
Through the glass I see you, but in death I’ll get to finally feel you.
Day is here and your death is near.
I want to die with you, go into the sky with you.
Please wait for me you're my soul mate
I love you my death row inmate.
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Corona
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2004-11-12 09:35:02]
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Re: My Death Row Inmate
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by pixie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:36:09 AM AEST
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a different write, very good tho,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: My Death Row Inmate
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by afterdark on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:42:09 AM AEST
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| A true waste of time |
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Re: My Death Row Inmate
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by subchild on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:04:33 AM AEST
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| Your the type woman who gives women a bad name..People on death row deserve what happens.. |
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Re: My Death Row Inmate
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by Flipped_out on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:12:02 AM AEST
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Ohh dear some harsh comments, the poetry its self is very good actually..the subject, hummm even one I probably would not touch..and Im pretty horrible apparently...maybe ok to love a death row in mate..if he's an unfortunate innocent (rare) or totally ficticious (odd)
but those women that write to people like Ramirez aka the night stalker....buahhhhhhhhhhh they are hillarious.. |
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Re: My Death Row Inmate
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by Corona on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:20:23 AM AEST
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| THIS IS THE REACTION I LOVE TO GET. Don't see this as being ME I write dark and weird poetry so if you get offended that's on you. I WANT THE READER TO BE DISGUSTED READ MY NEXT POEM!! |
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Re: My Death Row Inmate
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by shena_bean on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:25:00 AM AEST
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| who cares what those people think...its what you think of your poetry...and personally i loved it...it was great |
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Re: My Death Row Inmate
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by brew on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:35:31 AM AEST
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| I havent words for the write...........all is what one sees or have seen, with the inner depth of their heart and mind. |
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Re: My Death Row Inmate
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by lovesheir420 on
Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 05:26:06 PM AEST
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I know what its like to not be able to touch someone you love. you can't help if you love someone who's done something wrong. Sometimes they didn't even do anything wrong..
anyways, good poem. not my favorite style but I can relate. |
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