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Find A Wound Or Make One
Contributed by
Satrianus
on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:32:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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When we were friends, didn’t know who you were
You were much too smart, to let me into your thoughts
What were you thinking ?
Then you came out and stuck a knife in my back
Didn’t care how I bled, how can you be so cold ?
You feel so cold
But I found out how
Your mind works inside
You can pledge your vow
And then put it all aside
Find a wound or make one
How could you be so mean ?
Try to find a weak spot
And put yourself between
Find a wound or make one
And now I understand
Better be my honest enemy
than my lying friend
Now that we’re done, you are still trying to find
ways to put me down, with the lies you tell
You are such a liar
I made up my mind, you were never my friend
And I don’t ever want to see you again
Want you out of my life
But I found out how
Your mind works inside
You can pledge your vow
And then put it all aside
Find a wound or make one
How could you be so mean ?
Try to find a weak spot
And put yourself between
Find a wound or make one
And now I understand
Better be my honest enemy
than my lying friend
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Satrianus
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2004-11-12 08:32:41]
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Re: Find A Wound Or Make One
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by givingin on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:37:38 AM AEST
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Very good!
"Better be my honest enemy
than my lying friend"
this part says alot.
I think alot of people feel that way, yoiur ealy captured what you were trying to say
Congrates at doing a great job.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Find A Wound Or Make One
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by screwup on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:50:31 AM AEST
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agrees with givingin 100%... that really does say a lot, and it was my favorite part. you are a very talented writer, no matter if it's lyrics, poems, or both. you make a good song writer, AND a good poet.lol.
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Re: Find A Wound Or Make One
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by Flipped_out on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:04:55 AM AEST
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Hey you are good!! I like
Find a wound or make one!! almost a poem in its self
TY so much for sharing
Kelly x |
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