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FIELD OF DREAMS
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 07:54:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Love had taken his laughter away
Beside a field of buttercups he lay
Glowing embers had lost their spark
A field of dreams about to embark
Sweet fragrances wafted in the breeze
Taking in the beauty feeling at ease
Slowly drifting in and out of dreams
Life is never as picturesque as it seems
Remembers to well a perforated soul
Destroyed his aura a heart she stole
Among the field of gold reflections
A ray of hope shone giving directions
Songs that linger never sound the same
Souvenirs and tears beside a candle flame
Thoughts of the future memories of the past
Images linger in fields of dreams cast
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sweetangeluk
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2004-11-12 07:54:19]
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Re: FIELD OF DREAMS
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by persia on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:01:55 AM AEST
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Songs that liger never sound the same
-this line sticks coz its so true!
good write
persia |
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Re: FIELD OF DREAMS
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:28:17 AM AEST
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this is so beautifully written and moving, truely a masterpiece in poetic flight:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: FIELD OF DREAMS
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by pixie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:51:54 AM AEST
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that was so beautiful, really lovely
pixie xx |
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Re: FIELD OF DREAMS
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 02:40:34 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful, Angel..
Jenni |
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Re: FIELD OF DREAMS
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by Kie on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:27:58 AM AEST
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PLEASE I beg you send some inspiration my way! Across the atlantic! This was gorgeous to gorgeous for the word gorgeous.
From the title to the ending I was inside that poem.
Pass that magical pen my way this was superb!
Kie |
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Re: FIELD OF DREAMS
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 12:14:43 PM AEST
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This could have been written about me.........
Emotion will only allow to say....
Roses
Larry |
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Re: FIELD OF DREAMS
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by bernard on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 07:52:42 AM AEST
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SweetAngelUK You have a most gifted pen. Your poems are heart rending and show a true craftmanship of writing.
As usual I am very impressed with what you write Love from bernard. |
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Re: FIELD OF DREAMS
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:28:22 AM AEST
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You never fail to impress, entice, and beguil your reader's, mon cher plus ange! A work of sheer perfection! Vivid images flow sweetly in my mind, speaking of dreams and tales untold... Incredible!!! I love it!! Thank you so much for sharing this magnificent write, and commenting so beautifully on my works!! They are always appreciated! Such talent and splendor should be seen by all!! Many thanks once more, cheri! I enjoyed this piece! Much love. Forever,
Your friend,
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Re: FIELD OF DREAMS
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 10:53:10 PM AEST
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Awesome writ.e
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: FIELD OF DREAMS
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by bernard on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:58:07 AM AEST
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| A most beautiful poem pleasing to the ear more in this vein please love bernard. |
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Re: FIELD OF DREAMS
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by SimplyMe on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:47:28 AM AEST
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I ABSOLUTELY loved this poem! What's not to like? It was beautiful! Great job. So inspiring. I can relate in many ways. This speaks to me, i saw myself around the candle flames, and in the feild of flowers! Amazing write.
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