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Cut Loose
Contributed by
KSUHO11
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:05:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Cut Loose
What do you do
When your life changes in an instant
The sure things, sure people, aren’t sure anymore
In the blink of an eye, she doesn’t want me
No warning, no thought to how I would feel
She tells me she has to do it, for her, for us
I don’t believe her tainted words
It was only a distraction
So she could pierce my soul with eternal pain
It’s for the best is nothing but a lie
An attempt to sugarcoat pure poison
That you had no choice but to swallow
It doesn’t kill you; it just eats you up inside
She doesn’t even know what she has done
Her reason has no rhyme, has no place
I feel deaths icy touch on my heart
Which is good, I don’t want it anymore
I have no need since it was almost ripped out
But what do I do
My world has fallen apart all around me
That just leaves me
Guess I’d better cowboy up
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KSUHO11
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Re: Cut Loose
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by girish on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 02:33:47 AM AEST
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this is the 4th lost love piece i`m commenting on. take it easy it happens. only thing you can do is take your lover as a sister if your love will really not succeed. now the supposed lover should really love you but as a sister. your love for her will always be there for a brother. i`ve many lovers whom i have already taken as sisters.
read my poems get to it. it becomes easy.
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Re: Cut Loose
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by pixie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:56:45 AM AEST
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it will take some time for you to get over this break up, *hugs* just takew one day at a time... an emotional write,
pixie xx |
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