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cleansing
Contributed by
summers
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 10:23:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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wrinkled pillars
coated in dried blood
caked in the screams of innocents
a torture device
never cleaned
rusting in the basement
rarely is justice serve when the hand is slammed down with such speed
its not whats right. its whats convenient.
convenience is a treasure we take for granted.
Copyright ©
summers
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2004-11-11 22:23:52]
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Re: cleansing
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:39:59 PM AEST
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There's so much about this that I don't understand, but appreciate, if you can get your head around that sentiment. I must admit to being confused by your intro blurb.
Am I reading a newspaper clipping in the first six lines? I don't know - my paltry visualisation allows me very little in the way of realisation.
But I like the slant of the last line. And I agree.
Welcome to YPDC, by the way.
You're rather good. |
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Re: cleansing
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 03:40:38 AM AEST
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Like shakesspear said be true to thine self and if ppl could live as that, life wouldent be so!
This is the third of ur poems I have read they are unique you have alot of talent!!! |
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