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Ebony Eyes Are Smiling
Contributed by
Tamara
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:56:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I look at you and what do I see?
My life, my world
The one I love endlessly
Before me is a vision
That has eyes which read poetry
They sparkle brightly ahead
With an offer of immortality
You are a chest of treasures
To which I have the key
You're worth more than a flawless diamond
You are my fantasy
If you gazed into my ebony eyes
They would mirror what I feel for you
Because your eyes are the window to your soul
That's why mine smile for you.
Copyright ©
Tamara
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2004-11-11 21:56:42]
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Re: Ebony Eyes Are Smiling
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:02:07 PM AEST
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| Such a pretty love poem! Nice write. Cheers! |
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Re: Ebony Eyes Are Smiling
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:50:07 PM AEST
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Tamara
Beautifuly done great feeling & emotion
I look at you and what do I see
My life my world
The one I love endlessly
Wondeful begining it says alot about you
You to must be a beautiful person
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Re: Ebony Eyes Are Smiling
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:12:17 PM AEST
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| Oh I loved this little piece! Great write. Much peace. |
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Re: Ebony Eyes Are Smiling
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by maggsie on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 04:25:14 PM AEST
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yip, enjoyed it but loose you are my fantasy line, u dont need it and it sounds creepy, come on would u like to be someones fantasy.... maybe its just me but beautiful, uplifting.
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