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Little White Bird
Contributed by
n0body
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:45:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I feel you hate everyone because you seem to imply it,
Though I know if I asked you, you try to deny.
You probably just go without reason or rhyme,
To just live your life in your given time.
People really adore and love you too,
You accept the fact but shun what they do.
Out of everyone that loves you because of what they see,
You’d choose one person, which happened to be me.
At that time I saw a little white bird,
As if my prayers had been answered and I had finally been heard.
I also loved you as I watched you alone,
Then you chose me for a reason unknown.
Soon I was liked, because I was yours.
And said to be lucky for walking your floors.
People would tell us we were meant to be,
And after hearing this I finally felt free.
We’d walk through the crowds, with locked arms and a smile.
And I knew that our love would last for a while.
But when we were alone, back in our home.
You’d no longer give me that loving grin,
Instead you treat me like I were a sin.
Now, when I touched you, you’d jump away confused.
As if my touch had made you bruised.
And now I’m sorry that I did not see,
That I’m only here for you to use me.
Now I see.
We’re really not in love.
And I think since then I’ve lost site of my dove.
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n0body
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2004-11-11 21:45:12]
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Re: Little White Bird
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by DesperateSoul on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 06:45:05 PM AEST
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| Great write!! Keep Posting!! |
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Re: Little White Bird
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by Silent_Storm on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 07:21:08 PM AEST
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| I liked this one, San, especially the imagery and comparison you used with the little while bird. |
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Re: Little White Bird
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 07:49:51 PM AEST
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| This is sad and so touching. Sweet write. Blessings. |
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Re: Little White Bird
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by jeannoh on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:41:30 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem
very clear in messege
good flow
great rhyming
very emotional
thank you
Jeannoh |
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