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On a night not long ago
Contributed by
travisk
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:14:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I remember the details of that night
The swing music as we were dancing
Walking in that park under moonlight
Taking your hand as we went prancing
Landing on a bench with natural ease
My arm slid gently `round your shoulder
Having not a single fear that we should freeze
The increasing cold broken by our warmth much bolder
Ever so softly -- kissed your lips
Your fingers flowed smoothly through my hair
Down my hands ran to your hips
Pulled you close without a care
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2004-11-11 21:14:21]
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Re: On a night not long ago
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by Kia on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:36:58 PM AEST
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| i really enjoyed reading this poem however i the word prancing kinda feels out of place to me. |
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Re: On a night not long ago
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by travisk on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:00:16 PM AEST
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| yeah, I think 'romancing' is much more appropriate, though nothing would save the poem at this point |
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Re: On a night not long ago
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by Spike on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 04:13:13 AM AEST
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AND? man, don't keep me guessing! Seriously, a sweet write that connected me to a few of my close encounters. Thanks for your comment on HBD. I'd swap the feelings that inspired this poem for the ones that led me to write mine anyday.
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