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The Mortician's Love Song
Contributed by
MrMojoRisin
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 07:57:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The most beautiful girl to ever know this world
Here, alone in the dark dressed solemnly in black.
My heart skips a beat and my sould feels at ease
Dream of hopeless loners, it was love at first sight.
An angel lost on earth, her face so young and pure,
I never saw eyes as soft and blue or lips so
Perfect, lush, full of life.
Her hair was beautiful; Darker than the midnight
Heavens shining with stars waving over her head like
A calm gentle sea.
Her body so shapely like Venus imcarnate.
I close my eyes and eased trembling lips toward her own,
Only one kiss before the oak casket closes.
Copyright ©
MrMojoRisin
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2004-11-11 19:57:31]
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Re: The Mortician's Love Song
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 08:44:26 PM AEST
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| very dark, well done * |
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Re: The Mortician's Love Song
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by _Raspberry_ on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 10:19:04 PM AEST
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| I love it! A very dark and sickeningly suggestive write! |
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Re: The Mortician's Love Song
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 06:58:20 PM AEST
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hauntingly beautiful......... hugs n' love nessa
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