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You could die tomorrow!
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Theres nothing I can do for you,
Thats painful to say,
I wish I could help you live,
If even for one more day,
I know the pain is killing you,
I know It's killing me,
Because theres nothing I can do,
how can this be?
You are so young still,
more life to live,
But the clocks are ticking,
I wish I had the hours to give,
Just sitting there waiting to die,
Lying in bed,
Your whole world passing you by,
as if your already dead,
I hate to see you suffer,
Your eyes fill with tears,
What happened to the days,
What happened to the years?
Your kids are filled with sorrow,
Thats painful to see,
For you could die tomorrow,
and you'll be set free,
You could die tomorrow,
I cant bare the thought,
not having you on this life,
to share the thoughts I got,
Your illness came to such a surprise,
even still to this day,
I would have never realized,
That it wouldnt go away,
You could die tomorrow,
would I have the time to say......
That in your life time you have reached
me in some way!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2002-11-21 00:40:00]
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Re: You could die tomorrow!
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by OreO on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:55:29 AM AEST
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This is so sad, i've lost alot of
my family to cancer, it hurts deeply
to know that tomorrow may never
come for some people, This made
me cry so hard.. Thanks for sharing
this one Christina, my heart goes out
to you and your friend..
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: You could die tomorrow!
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:34:45 AM AEST
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| I've lost friends and family to cancer too....This was a very beautiful poem about a very tragic circumstance. Well done! Larry |
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Re: You could die tomorrow!
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 3rd September 2020 @ 11:48:14 PM AEST
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| Very sad but beautiful... |
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