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Unheard Mute...
Contributed by
Unheard_Mute
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 05:44:50 PM in AEST
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I'm always quiet, always left behind,
Just sit and watch as the world passes by,
Keep all my emotions stuck in my mind,
No one hears my thoughts, no one hears me cry.
I've not the power to make myself heard,
Nor does anyone want to hear my voice,
For anyone to care, is just absurd,
I'll just sit and watch, I don't have a choice.
I form my opinions from what I see,
I sit and witness as they come and go,
I am jealous of how they can be free,
I have to watch from within the shadow.
I just speculate, all my thoughts are moot,
Quiet till I die, I am the Unheard Mute...
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2004-11-11 17:44:50]
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Re: Unheard Mute...
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by brew on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 05:53:03 PM AEST
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| This is extremely sad.........yet deep. I am sorry you feel this way. People all have reasons to live and things to say and do. |
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Re: Unheard Mute...
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 06:22:25 PM AEST
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| always chambered.......i love that...... |
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Re: Unheard Mute...
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 02:17:51 AM AEST
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| wow, i love it.. remember James, no matter what, i'll always love you...... |
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Re: Unheard Mute...
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:08:03 PM AEST
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| amazing and brilliant. nice rhythym and rhyme. ::jealous:: |
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Re: Unheard Mute...
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 12:59:47 PM AEST
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| I can hear you |
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Re: Unheard Mute...
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by blackholesun on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:20:46 PM AEST
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| well your voice is heard by me!i liked it,cool way to express your self,myself however i express myself allot,and i never nderstood why others couldnt but now i do thanx! |
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Re: Unheard Mute...
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by blackholesun on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:20:47 PM AEST
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| well your voice is heard by me!i liked it,cool way to express your self,myself however i express myself allot,and i never nderstood why others couldnt but now i do thanx! |
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