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Pool of Me
Contributed by
sid_the_tampon_fairy
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 05:09:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You cut me deep
I lie in a pool of my blood
But still you yell, cutting deeper
I cry out
You dont care
You scream to make yourself feel better
The pool grows thicker, wider
I try to fight back
But smart remaks is the best I can do
You yell on
Insulting me
(I thought you loved me)
The pool turns to a lake
Sadness runs in streams
They run into my mouth
And burn like acid
Yell. Yell my friend
The cuts will mend and scar
But I will be stronger
Stronger than you
And you, foe
Will wish that you had never cut me
The things I did where never enough
I hope, I wish, I pray
That you'll realize what youve done
Before I heal
You can apoligize
But I wont forgive
But it may just save you
Maybe one day
Youll know what its like
To pick up the pieces...
Dudes...if you made it through this entire poem, I applaud you! This one was sucktastic...sorry about that! *hugs for suffering through it*
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Re: Pool of Me
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by kaitolyn on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 05:24:42 PM AEST
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that wasn't sucktastic.
i thought it was good! |
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Re: Pool of Me
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:36:37 PM AEST
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| that was a nice write..dont put yourself down :-p |
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