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Not thinking, Yet leaving out
Contributed by
brew
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 05:07:24 PM in AEST
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To a best friend, who has been there indeed
But sometimes , you forget and do not heed
You see them as you want and not what they need
You finally relise , what have you achieved?!
You try and get back what was forgotten
But is, it possible for them to allow the out come
You know deep the mind and heart
What you have is the best and more
Copyright ©
brew
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2004-11-11 17:07:24]
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Re: Not thinking, Yet leaving out
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by englishprincej on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 03:24:32 PM AEST
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The person to whom you write is so lucky to have you as a friend, almost as lucky as you think you are to have them.
Friendship clearly means so much to you and you truly do understand it.
Lovely piece to read and think about. Thank you for taking the time to post it. |
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Re: Not thinking, Yet leaving out
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:42:21 PM AEST
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a great friendship poem well done.
johnny. |
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Re: Not thinking, Yet leaving out
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by Vampyre_BloodWraith on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:27:29 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, so endearing must be cool to have friends.
Enjoyed reading your write. |
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