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Troubled times...........Yet they are Fabtabolous
Contributed by
brew
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 04:53:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Thecool crisp air
The soft leaves from the trees
The wonderful thoughts
The one who has them, and with you
You walk alone, and the prince appears
To what you have, and takes all the fears
The subtle look and the shyness around
Makes one know, what they have found
You stop and wonder with all glow
Happiness, and warm feeling makes you flow
Keeps you from doubting, what you thought you may gave
To have the one to hold you and make your save
Go back to the cool crisp air that perceives
To that time and moment ...........you know what you achieved
Life takes a toll on our lives, and sometimes we take granted what is the best and it is in our eyes!
Lost love, will never be.............Just a hold for now and will be achieved.!!!!
Copyright ©
brew
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2004-11-11 16:53:26]
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Re: Troubled times...........Yet they are Fabtabolous
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 08:05:31 PM AEST
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| Very nice! And thank you for posting something *positive*. |
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Re: Troubled times...........Yet they are Fabtabolous
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by englishprincej on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 03:19:58 PM AEST
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| Beautiful work. Nice to see you posting again. Great images you create. |
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Re: Troubled times...........Yet they are Fabtabolous
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by bernard on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 03:13:25 AM AEST
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| Good poem I like the erraticness of style here bernard. |
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Re: Troubled times...........Yet they are Fabtabolous
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by Vampyre_BloodWraith on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:33:04 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem, nice images painted by your words, nice to read something written lightly but with feeling. enjoyible reading. |
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