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SUMMER STORM
Contributed by
Alexander_McDonald
on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She walked into my life,
Like a summer storm.
Warm gentle rain.
Lips like red wet roses.
Lightening struck me,
Not once,
But twice.
She blew me away,
With her hurricane eyes.
Hair caressed by the breeze.
Hips that moved like ships on the seas.
A voice like the rustle of the leaves.
My heart spun,
Like a tornado wind.
Beating hard,
Like thunderin'.
She passed over me,
Like a cloud floats on the air.
Like a summer storm,
She didn't care.
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Re: SUMMER STORM
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by OreO on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:16:01 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this one alot
It's so beautiful, it' gives such
a beautiful vision , and the
way you used the storm
and the rain in it, Absolutely
Beautiful!!!! Thanks for
sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: SUMMER STORM
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by chatabox on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 03:00:11 AM AEST
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| what a wonderful way to describe her. My hubby always says women are as changable as the whether anyway. |
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