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untiled
Contributed by
BabyFacedAngel2010
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 03:45:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Why do you treat me like im invisable?
Why dont you notice me?
I try and try and im getting tried.
I love you and i dont think you really do.
You say it to make me happy but yet you ignore me too.
Happyness needs alittle love too.
So if you cant understand this way your not worth my time so let me go but easy please cause
I really dont want to hurt knowing you dont care.
I took you back and it was ok but you got lazy and so did I.
I stoped calling 2 or 3 times,I stoped comeing over and I ignored you
In school but only cause I had to.
Maybe when you see me with a better guy will you then know i ment what I said.
I love you but you didnt....so it over.....
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2004-11-11 15:45:24]
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Re: untiled
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 03:58:29 PM AEST
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| this poem feels like it comes straight from the heart - you've wrote an excellent honest poem here |
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Re: untiled
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:31:30 PM AEST
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| Yup. Honest and straightforward. Hope he listens. Cheers! |
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