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BLACK HEART OF KNIGHTS

Contributed by Alexander_McDonald on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Broke her heart,
Like a violin string.

Will she ever love again?
Will she ever sing?

I tore off her wings,
And yet she flew back to me.

I put that loving look in her eyes,
And then tore them out with my words.

I broke her heart,
With my selfishness.

I smashed her hopes,
Against the rocks of sorrow.

And they cut into my feet,
Like broken shards of glass,
As I walked away.

She hates me now,
Like she should.

She loved me more,
Than I could.

More than I could love her.

A Black Knight of Hearts am I.
Riding a white stallion of lies.
Into the sunset of my shame.

Copyright © 1993 by Alexander McDonald
All rights reserved.
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Copyright Â© Alexander_McDonald ... [ 2002-11-20 23:40:00]
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Re: BLACK HEART OF KNIGHTS (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:50:21 PM AEST
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Alexander this was a very good write,& a tough lesson learned! Christina

Re: BLACK HEART OF KNIGHTS (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:08:31 AM AEST
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Oh you should show her this poem
I would forgive for a poem like this
This is so beautifully written and it's
so sad it brought tears to my eyes
Thanks for sharing this one Alex
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: BLACK HEART OF KNIGHTS (User Rating: 1 )
by springchic1979 on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:01:05 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed your poem, the imagery was wonderful. I look forward to reading more of your works in the future!

Yvonne

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