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The Light & The Dark
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:36:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The sun, the brightness.
The moon, the dark welcoming night.
The morning sun creeps upon the dying sunset.
A silvery moon shoots into the black night,
Leaving a trail of gleaming stars.
The Light & The Dark,
A blanket of blending in between them.
Come into the light of the bright day.
The darkness winds around me, pulling me in.
I see into the foreboding night,
Looking for nothing & longing for nothing.
The sun, it blinds me, erasing me from existence.
My skin I see turns pale & milky white.
My deepest sins, & troubles smother me,
In a pit of sorrow & sadness.
The tears of my soul drop into a pool of solitude.
The light, slashing at me, wanting to escape.
The light and the dark have captured me once again.
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Crimson_Rose
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2004-11-11 14:36:50]
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Re: The Light & The Dark
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by Red_October on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:41:37 PM AEST
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| I like the image this brings, being trapped between light and dark and every opposite of the lives that each of us lives. Excellent poem. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: The Light & The Dark
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by Kewi on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 07:30:55 PM AEST
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| This is a really good poem. Agreed that it does give you a really clear image in your mind...though kind of sad in my head at least. |
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